Tuesday, November 23, 2010
my adventure
About nine years ago,happened to me the position. actully it was scary adventure.when we rode the car and sat in the last.when the car was traveling at high speed.suddenly opened the back door and almost falls little cousin.and quickly i cought him and entered into the inside.but the air pressure pulled me out instead of him.and i felt that i would lose every thing especially my life.finally the car stopped and avoided the mistakes,but actully it was the most difficult adventure in my life.
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Thanks, Hanouf; but, sorry, you have used Google Translator!!! Please rewrite your paragraph using your own words so that you would be able to learn from your mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
Hanouf, instead of using Google Translator, try to use http://phras.in/ - this is a very good tool where you can enter two sentences to select the appropriate one. For example, if you write a sentence but you are not sure whether it's correct or not and then tried to write it in another way; all you need to do is to type the two sentences in the box at http://phras.in/ and it will tell you which one is better.
ReplyDeleteHope this helps..